Eduardo Corral has asked for some notebook musings and so you have some. This is from the top page of my yellow-pad:
-like sable plumes on helmets
-cards perfumed with balsam
-sometimes her yellow hair
got into the corners of his mouth
-bound in tunic and dark carmel papers.
-in the moonlight it is jade-green snow
-there are two versions of her story
-licorice-flavored tobacco
-a bat caught in a wall of linen
-rings on the inside of the coffee mug from milk look like tree rings
-dizzying trapezoid rooms
-moisture on plums form a window
-agates in the window and dry pussywillow
-linger like red berries in winter
1 day ago
2 comments:
oliver, this is beautiful: "in the moonlight it is jade-green snow."
and "wall of linen" reminds me of the painter leon golub.
peace, barb
Thanks Barb! They're basically lines that are poem-less at the moment. ;-)
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